My Love For You
Tell the wind to stop blowing, tell my mind
to stop thinking, throw a rock in the ocean
and tell it to stop sinking, tell the sky to stop
looking blue, because all it’s saying is for me to
stop loving you.
By: Chris
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Chris,
The way you use rhyme to emphasize your point is creative. I like the "sinking of the rock" metaphor. Your words mimic some of the great modern poets. The poem is a contrast to your blog presentation, Thug Life.
Mrs. Basham
kriz,
The way use rhyme to emphasize your point is creative. nah just kidding hey nice poem but i think is not your style
Nice Chris....um...go find ur rock in the ocean.Good poem.
hey i like the poem it is really good ...hahaha lol
so what have u been up 2 my hommie..
well talk 2 u l8ter
luv, lora
heii..
this poem doesn't sound like u..
but its a nice poem anyways
<3
~casie
hey man whats up
well i like the poem u wrote its so sweet i wonder if its taling bout anyone jk
well ttyl
lovea ya
♥amanda
i like it...
doesnt really seem like you...
but i like it...
:]
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